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Lap 1: We race into the turn, cars all around…no where to go but follow…Pass a few cars here, there, before entering the backstretch….do the same in 3 and 4

Lap 10: The field is spread out….not a lot but enough to maneuver. A 16 car is infront of me, I draft him before going around the high side on him, dead even at the line.

Lap 25: The car is loose in 1 and 2, tight in 3 and 4. crew says to adjust the break bias, so I do, but not by much…

Lap 50: Arms are tired, sweat gets in my eye, almost time to pit…”Come in this time…” I hear…I follow…

Lap 55: In 30th position, because of pits, caution waves on the track for debris. I can finally take a break and gain a few spots in the process…

Lap: 62: Green waves again, moved up to 11th…not bad in my book…but it ain’t first place….

Lap: 70: A cars engine detonates and sprays the field with oil…some cars run into each other to avoid…but just causes a big wreck…luckily, I avoided it, but became a lawn mower in the process…

Lap 71: RED FLAG! Great…car is cooling, and so are the drivers…we all start talking to each other, “Did anybody see that car blow up?”, says the driver in the 72 car, “Yeah…I was on his low side when he went…” Says the driver of the 13 car…”I was behind him…” I say, “So YOU were that lawn mower in the grass? Huh…nice kid…” The driver of the 72 says, “Thanks, but I gotta clean my grill…so I’ll lose 11th…” I say in response, “You’ll be fine, a lot of cars were taking out, so you’ll be 19th…” The driver of the 98 says, popping in with news…”Thanks…preciate it…” I say…”Don’t expect that kindness on the track…or under green…” the driver of the 23 says, “Thanks Shirlock Holmes, we would have suffered a great loss if we didn’t know that…” The driver of the 13 says. I’ll admit I laughed, but turned my mic off so I didn’t piss anyone off and get sent to the wall…

Lap 72: Caution is out again…We are moving…but soon will stop to pit…

Lap 77: GREEN!!! We’re back under way…in 18th, because car behind me got problems…

Lap 80: We been running for an hour and a half…I gotta pee…so I do what a driver must…

Lap 90: can’t wait for lap 100…means halfway….I’m in 12th moving up…but taking my time and watching my moves…

Lap 95: Car next to me looses a tire and smack the wall, hard…he’s fine though…

Lap 100: Halfway home, in 10th…2 more pit stops….
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muggle-chick's avatar
Wow! This is really good and very descriptive!!!